In a valuable sidestep from the usual call and response approach, Vincent Katz and Barry Schwabsky inaugurated the recent (and coincidental) series of fully collaborative conversations here on Likestarlings. In their guest palaver from August 2010 the process is made splendidly transparent. We see who wrote what in their first poem, as well as the interplay of critique and deliberation as two minds gradually craft a single work. Hints of that crafting emerge metapoetically in their second item, ‘The Line’, with
Could be something new altogether
Or a break in flow in what had started
The line shimmers innocently
Let me know your thoughts
Then in ‘Uncertain Noises’ the straighforwardness of a co-operative writing is perhaps questioned by ‘Only an older and more distant/ Symbiosis, fit as survival’. The poem must arise from whatever vexed or uncanny set of contingencies gave it its birth. In these more recent pieces we are left guessing the authorship of individual stanzas, lines, words even; but maybe we are led to a place where we can wonder if such questions of individuation are in fact relevant at all.
Undoubtedly, a fundamental characteristic of the human mind is to sort, to recognise one from the other. The blending of voices, styles and histories in collaborative writing challenges that instinct and forces us to push forward into new territories as readers. It is from those new lands that the just completed collaborative chain by Julia Cohen and Frances Presley arrives.

As Frances commented (in recent email correspondence), ‘I must admit there were moments when I thought, did I write this?! And, of course, in collaboration, I is another.’ This is doubly pertinent because Frances and Julia’s sequence is firmly rooted in place, or two places to be (in)exact: Denver and its surrounding national forests (see below) for Julia and for Frances a particular former railway line now nature reserve in north London. However, while the local exerts a definite pull, a wider concern, reflective of the intercontinental span of this pairing, is in evidence: ‘counterfeit the global exchange’ (’ribs & leaves’). Likewise, a poem apparently describing ‘Archway tunnel’ (part of Frances’s walk) can surely only be transformed, and indeed transform its subject, when a poet from far away is invited into its mysteries. Throughout ‘bricks grow’ the perspective is joyously in flux: to whom do ‘my fingers’, ‘my feet’ belong? who
are ‘you’? whose are ‘our clouds’, ‘our ground’, ‘our hands’?
We see evidence of a potentially liberating loss (or metamorphosis) of the authorial self that can be attained in collaborative practices. Perhaps poets return from such adventures energised and, paradoxically, knowing themselves better. For us as readers, as well as being artefacts worthy of study in themselves, the poems could be hinting at a more open appreciation of literature as something less tied to the cult of personality.
This sequence also functions in other dimensions: Julia and Frances exchanged images of their respective locales and wrote partially in response to these prompts. The images sometimes form a part of the finished work as well, worrying the solidity of what poem should contain. We are reminded that writing (and reading) collaboratively can be – to a greater or lesser extent – an immersive process. How far could one take the provision of such stimuli? Ambient audio files seem another obvious extension. Momentarily inhabiting another writer’s space, however remotely and imaginatively, can certainly enrich one’s own dwelling on
the word.

Aside from supplementary illustrations, the texts themselves are already highly visual – ‘Two red contrails converge’ (’Glazed Leaf’) – and careful attention has been placed on their layouts. In ‘acid grassland’ the left- and right-justified lines can’t help but talk to each other, whoever may be saying them, and ‘mining bees burrow tiny holes in the ground’ at the bottom begins to disappear through its own edgy perforations.
Images are also foregrounded in another collaborative conversation underway between Laynie Browne and Matt ffytche. The pictures they have selected are more abstract, and their relation to the texts more oblique, but those opening colours reverberate through the experience of associated poems. The texts are densely woven, and despite some degree of familiarity with their previous work I would find extremely difficult to discern who wrote what. Actually, to attempt such a thing seems both inappropriate and pointless, especially while observing the deft shifts of subject and location flowing into each other – ‘open bids with second voices’ (’Sixfold Elegy (b)’). There is a clear engagement with recent world events, ‘a ferry balanced on the roof of a neighbour’s house/ stared into the city and its subsequent fire’ (’Enkindle’), making these poems of deep concern and combined forces. We hope to have more collaborative chains illuminating the LS electropages soon.
[Upper image © Frances Presley, lower image © Julia Cohen]